OK These are the Final Versions.

[Komodo]

http://homepage.ntlworld.com/jenifer.hughes/Adam/

These are I think a big improvement. And I have made my tone thicker and it is complete with drums. Hope I have improved. These were very time consuming and spent a while re-doing some of the tracks to get them as near perfect as I could. Hope you like and enjoy.

Feedback Appreciated.

[Komodo]

Hmm Anyone?? :(

[Komodo]

Please post some responses. Is it really that hard?

[Katau]

The riffs are good...it keeps my attention.

Areas for improvement on Track1:
- add a bass guitar track (even if you have to use a clean guitar)
- push the snare down a bit
- push the kick up a bit
- use another download site (it took 5 minutes for a 1.32MB file)

[Komodo]

Thanks. Sorry for the long wait.

[BMG_SKULK]

1st track...
The recording is not bad...but a direct in would sound better maybe for
your particular recording environment. (Garage...cheap mic?)

Also the first lead bend you hear is out of tune.
Maybe re-listen and re-think that one.

2nd track...

Recording quality the same...
Basic chords...very basic.

3rd track
Better chords...leadwork is painfully out of tune.

4th track
Acoustic sounds decent.
Drums a little loud, especially the mid-TOM area...

Keep jammin'...

[Komodo]

Ok thanks for the opinions. Just one thing. How can my leadwork be out of tune? My guitar and intonation are all in tune and hardly go out of tune. Hmmmm, maybe its the notes.

[BMG_SKULK]

Ok thanks for the opinions. Just one thing. How can my leadwork be out of tune? My guitar and intonation are all in tune and hardly go out of tune. Hmmmm, maybe its the notes.I thnk it's mostly in
your bends, and yes some in the choice of notes.

When you bend a note, vibrato a note, whammy a note,...that is the time
when everything else can not help you. You are alone, just you, a string,
and your ears.

I don't know how long you have been playing, but there is nothing in your
music that won't get better with a little time and experience.

Like I said...keep jammin....you'll get there.

I hope I wasn't too harsh, but I feel real and honest feedback is the only
way to improve, or to help others improve.

[Komodo]

thats true, thanks for being honest :)