First recording.....would like everyones opinion....

[crazymaf2003]

Hey board...new member here....i just did my first recording...It of a White Stripes Song ( 7 nation army) Now iam not a fan of the band but the song was a simple song to redo and thats what i was searching for..I play all guitars and leads, the bass and drums in this song..My friend is singing it...PLEASE listen to the entire song 2nd and 3rd verse has the small leads....I used a Fender strat for rythums, Schecter ( with Mods ) a fender Jazz bass a Dr. rythum Drum machine....I use cakewalk pro for recording it...its all Direct recording using a J station and a Mixer and some other stuff....now it isnt perfect cause iam new to all the new gear but i would like everyones opinion, tthanks.......here is link...
http://us.f2.yahoofs.com/bc/1724c6d6/bc/Mark+3.mp3?BCuBmw_AbvFHISHz

[BrettV]

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