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Mr. Boston
March 6th, 2008, 11:34 AM
To my "Can't Find the Blues" tune which I posted in Showcase last week or whatever. Anyway it was really just one VERSE before, only repeated. I've added a second one.

"Can't Find the Blues"

(Verse 1)
Well I can’t find the blues, looked high and low
All the usual places, in my soul.

It’s cold and it’s rainin’ but it won’t fall on me.
Nothin’ but blue skies everywhere I go.

Got a woman who loves me, you know she’s all mine.
Makin’ plenty of money, and my dog’s doing fine.

Well this guitar is cryin’ not a tear in my eye.
Ain’t it just like the blues to leave you high and dry?
(Mini Guitar Solo)

(Verse 2)
Well I can’t find the blues, been lookin’ all night
From the purple of sundown, to the dawn’s early light.

Well I’m living the good life, in the usual way;
Stayin’ up with my woman, and sleepin’ all day.

I been drinkin’ my whiskey, bring my blues back again
I wonder if they miss me, the way I miss them.

Just a simple blues singer, with no pain in my heart.
Guess I’ll just let my fingers, try and do their part.
(Longer Guitar Solo, Repeat Verse 1)

gusstro
March 7th, 2008, 07:20 PM
very nice i really like it. The part where you say i guess ill let my fingers do there part is kind of like in Red House where he says Thats alright I still got my guitar then goes into a solo lol i always like that and when you are playing it for people it can really kind of pump you up for the solo lol. I like it.

Mr. Boston
March 9th, 2008, 10:46 PM
Thanks gusstro.

Hitman!
March 9th, 2008, 10:52 PM
I really love the two first lines of the second verse. Very well done.


I have a suggestion for the last lines:

"Just a simple blues singer, with no pain in my heart.
Guess I’ll stay on my couch smelling my own farts."

D'you like it? :D

Mr. Boston
March 10th, 2008, 08:53 AM
I really love the two first lines of the second verse. Very well done.


I have a suggestion for the last lines:

"Just a simple blues singer, with no pain in my heart.
Guess I’ll stay on my couch smelling my own farts."

D'you like it? :D

HAHAHAHA, yeah, I like it plenty but I'm not sure how well it fits; as I am NOT prepared to do a fart-solo every time I play that tune, lol.

TeleTristan
March 10th, 2008, 09:05 AM
Me or Jay could do a fart solo at any point... drinking beers, eating hummus. However there really isn't enough ventilation in the room to be doing fart solo's... besides it makes the microphone smell, and taste bad.

Mr. Boston
March 10th, 2008, 09:07 AM
Me or Jay could do a fart solo at any point... drinking beers, eating hummus. However there really isn't enough ventilation in the room to be doing fart solo's... besides it makes the microphone smell, and taste bad.

Well if he keeps taking those vitamin supplements, Jay might be breakin' out fart solos whether we write 'em into the songs or not.

ZampraZ
March 10th, 2008, 09:18 AM
That had some really nice rhymes, sounds very blues ish. Me like

Mr. Boston
March 10th, 2008, 09:37 AM
That had some really nice rhymes, sounds very blues ish. Me like

Thanks dude.