"Friendly Skies"

[Evildoer]

Glad I read the sticky!:drunk:

Any love for this?

"Friendly Skies"

Whatever happened to
Honest smiles, Friendly skies
Good times, happy highs
Starry nights, easy lives
Open eyes and open minds

How did they sell you
Dirty lies and alibis
Soundbites, suits and ties
Bad vibes, day and night
Super-sized borrowed lives

Whatever happened to
The empathy
between you and me
Are we strangers?
Are we enemies ?

Whatever happened to
Your identity
Your integrity
Did you sell them out
For luxuries?

What can you say?
A big toothy grin
A secret handshake
what lurks within
Is an empty fake

[Hitman!]

COOL! I'm impressed by the first verses, really. The entire thing is very very good, but first two, wow. So many double rhymes mixed with faked rhymes, man it gives a cool sound to it, rolls in my mouth :)

And I think the theme is maybe not new, but you pull it out in a new way, I love it. Continue writing man.

[Disaronno]

mad love for it.

Keep it up.

I look forward to hearing it sung.

[genereaux]

I like it. Let's hear it.


sean