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deathmedic
March 26th, 2008, 01:14 PM
I'd like some comments on these lyrics please

Unholy Burial

Your life has drained you of your mortal soul
Singing at the cross roads
Waiting for the devil
whispering his name

Iblis Iblis Iblis Iblis Iblis

Selling your life to heresy
Crying for life you never had
You owe him dearly, money no issue
you hear his name chanting

Asmodia Asmodia Asmodia

At your own funeral, buried alive
Dying from oxygen
Going red in despair


Your unholy burial is your end


it's kinda Satanistic

Melodic-Fate
March 26th, 2008, 01:20 PM
Pretty good, it's got a good rhythm to it.

freetime
March 26th, 2008, 02:53 PM
I can't dissect poetry. please translate

genereaux
March 26th, 2008, 03:47 PM
I'd be curious to hear it. I'd like to see how the vocal pattern works itself around the names...


sean

deathmedic
March 27th, 2008, 12:11 PM
I can't dissect poetry. please translate

it's about a man selling his soul for a nice life, but the devil wants his pay.
so the man gets buried alive.


I'd be curious to hear it. I'd like to see how the vocal pattern works itself around the names...


sean

thanks.. i'm still trying to get it all out of my head atm.