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Vortexan
April 11th, 2008, 02:45 PM
El Despoblado (the unhabited land), is what the Spanish called the Big Bend area of West Texas along the Rio Grande. I wrote most of this quite a while ago but just dusted it off to try and finish it. Current events with the border fence going up needed to be in there somewhere. Anyhow it reads as poetry so I thought I'd share it. I'm still somewhat unsure of how to approach it musically but definitely some sort of spanish/mexican vibe to it.

El Despoblado
Copyright – Michael C. Marks 4-19-2008

El Despoblado the uninhabited land
Down by the bend in the old Rio Grande
Keeper of secrets no tongue could tell
For thousands of years she’s kept them so well

The first to arrive in this vast empty place
Left little behind that time can’t erase
Rock art and legends of ghosts in the hills
Say they’ll return but they never will

Then the Spanish came in search of their gold
Losing their mines the legends are told
They claimed this land for 300 years
Until manifest destiny made it to here

We all have our time and we all have our place
You can forget the names you can forget the face
But we’ll all be remembered by what’s left behind
And the legacy left in the passage of time

Then the miners who dug for the cinnabar ore
Left ghostowns in ruins and closed down the store
And ranchers with cattle who fenced off the range
In the blink of an eye everything changed

Now it’s tourists and tour guides with passports in hand
And the border patrols on the old Rio Grande
With fences to separate and divide
Cause that side is yours and this side is mine

We all have our time and we all have our place
You can forget the names you can forget the face
But we’ll all be remembered by what’s left behind
And the legacy left in the passage of time

El Despoblado the magical land
Down by the bend in the old Rio Grande
Keeper of secrets no tongue could tell
For thousands of years she’s kept them so well

Veritas
April 11th, 2008, 04:10 PM
Nice work man!

gusstro
April 11th, 2008, 06:49 PM
very good... alittle bit of a let down as i thought it was all gunna be in spanish lol. But other then that very good

determined2play
April 11th, 2008, 06:53 PM
Great job Vortexan. Good phrasing. It reads well.

Vortexan
April 12th, 2008, 04:55 AM
Nice work man!
Thanks V!
very good... alittle bit of a let down as i thought it was all gunna be in spanish lol. But other then that very good
Thanks, mi espanol es no bueno por caca:rolleye:
Great job Vortexan. Good phrasing. It reads well.Thanks a lot D I'm pretty happy with it and looking forward to getting it recorded. I'll post it as soon as I do.

Lazy Bee
April 29th, 2008, 07:34 AM
After hearing it in Showcase I wanted to take a read...great job! It's an important song, if that makes any sense. At least that's just how it strikes me.

Vortexan
April 29th, 2008, 02:20 PM
After hearing it in Showcase I wanted to take a read...great job! It's an important song, if that makes any sense. At least that's just how it strikes me.
I just mailed out 10 copies to Terlingua, Texas where the song is about. Those people down there will think it important. It is true west history. Thanks for the comment Jerry!

millrat
April 29th, 2008, 07:07 PM
I love the story on this. I'm fascinated by the old west. It seems as though you've tied the old west to the new. The fact that this is based on a real place makes it very cool. I lstened to it in showcase and it has the old west vibe to it. Marty Robbins would be proud. Nice job

Vortexan
May 1st, 2008, 04:55 AM
I love the story on this. I'm fascinated by the old west. It seems as though you've tied the old west to the new. The fact that this is based on a real place makes it very cool. I lstened to it in showcase and it has the old west vibe to it. Marty Robbins would be proud. Nice job
Thanks millrat. It is the demise of the old west.....