Cigarette dreams

[backrightpocket]

The smoke drifts from my cigarette
Just like the thoughts i had for you
You never call I almost miss your voice
Give it some time
And I won't know you anymore
it's not like you cared
It's not like you ever would.
That necklace you wear
Doesn't hide you from me.
.
I hope it helps you to hide from yourself
.
Trying to hard to cover up your life(lies)
The leaves fall from the trees
Trust like the love as it escapes from me
Trying hard to get over it
It floats around in my head
The seasons come or i wish they would.
Speaking out written words
I shouldn't care
But i think i do
Remember when I talked to you..

BREAK DOWN!






but please critique my writing!
someday soon i hope to get good enough at guitar to turn this into a song :)