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Disaronno
September 16th, 2008, 12:01 PM
This is the first song that if you completely took away the music I play with it I would still say that I wrote it well and expressed everything I wanted to exress.

You guys saw my earlier writings so I figure I should share this with you so maybe someone else that was in my stage can learn from the progress.

It feels pretty cool to finally start to like my writing. Its like its own little high and then I add the music....

Anyway I love playing guitar and everything about it. Here are the lyrics.

Moving backwards
Stunted growth
Wrinkled eyes from all those
Meaningless toasts

Self destruction
Has become your self
Gave up on everything
Happiness and health

I'm not your keeper
So I shouldn't care
But you leave me restless
And I want to be there

Someday you'll blossom
Someday you'll see
Lost all control
When you gave up on me

Feigned progress
Calloused change
Stuck in a life
You're too scared to rearrange

Mirrored misconceptions
Masked truths
That you keep hidden
In your youth

I'm not your lover
So I shouldn't mind
But we have a history
and I invested so much time

Someday you'll blossom
Someday you'll see
Lost a good friend
When you gave up on me


Yea. I basically just admitted to myself and accepted the fact that I love sad sappy love songs. Now when I'm writing one I'm not thinking, "Jeez can't you write anything else!" and instead I just .. write.. i guess..

Hope ya dig it.