Wrote a song this morning...

[emersa_guitar]

Its called Lady Luck, some realizations and sensations that I had after I came out of a week long kidney stone bout. Intend to sing it and post very soon.

Some doctors and preachers
once came to my house
they were told that I was dead
but they still had their doubts

And when they saw me
standing on my own two feet
They grunted like warthogs
From their crooked little snouts

But I tell them I've been favored by luck
favored by luck all my time
And I was makin it big
makin it big whtihout a dime
And when she shall come one day
asking for return
I'd tell my lady luck
what did I give on my turn

Whoa oh whoa oh whoa oh oh won't give it back
Whoa oh whoa oh whoa oh oh won't give it back

Those doctors and preachers
are not so long gone
the pain in my right hand
still makes me lose my sleep

Cause now there is no more
Serenity to be seen
No more unconquered beliefs
In the ******* deep

[emersa_guitar]

Its called Lady Luck, some realizations and sensations that I had after I came out of a week long kidney stone bout. Intend to sing it and post very soon.

Some doctors and preachers
once came to my house
they were told that I was dead
but they still had their doubts

And when they saw me
standing on my own two feet
They grunted like warthogs
From their crooked little snouts

But I tell them I've been favored by luck
favored by luck all my time
And I was makin it big
makin it big whtihout a dime
And when she shall come one day
asking for return
I'd tell my lady luck
what did I give on my turn

Whoa oh whoa oh whoa oh oh won't give it back
Whoa oh whoa oh whoa oh oh won't give it back

Those doctors and preachers
are not so long gone
the pain in my right hand
still makes me lose my sleep

Cause now there is no more
Serenity to be seen
No more unconquered beliefs
In the ******* deep

Is it that bad?

[MelonSnapple]

I actually like it. Make it a funk song.

[Reags]

I like it too.

I especially like the first two stanzas, they build a really interesting mental picture of these "doctors". I've had a ton of experience with that kinda crowd and I know how it can feel like they are all against you sometimes.

[emersa_guitar]

I actually like it. Make it a funk song.

I will think about that. Thanks.

I like it too.

I especially like the first two stanzas, they build a really interesting mental picture of these "doctors". I've had a ton of experience with that kinda crowd and I know how it can feel like they are all against you sometimes.

Glad you liked the song, it was just about this state of mind.

[GL5027]

Very Nice, I agree you should make it a funk song.

[emersa_guitar]

Very Nice, I agree you should make it a funk song.

Thanks for the feedback. Appreciate it.

I need help though cause I don't have much experience with funk music.