New Lyrics outside of my normal Genre

[determined2play]

I'm standing right in front of you
But you feel a thousand miles away

Knowing what your going through
There is nothing I can say

Watching you walk away

Seeing the tears in your eyes

Knowing there's nothing to say

But Goodbye


Night after night after night

Day after day after day.....


Feeling like I'm in a hole
Reaching for the sky
Darkness starts to settle in
Earth covering my eyes

Watching you walk away

Seeeing the tears in your eyes

Now there is nothing to say

Nothing but

Goodbye.

[Mr.Excitement]

a couple thoughts went through my mind as I read through your lyrics.
I can see a jilted lover or a burial scene.
I would love to hear this one backed with instrumental.

JIm

[Stray Dog]

I like this. The strongest bit is definately

"I'm standing right in front of you
But you feel a thousand miles away

Knowing what your going through
There is nothing I can say"

I can really 'see' these words being put to music without any effort, whilst the rest I think I would really need to hear your music to see how they work. But those first four lines I know can be used in countless ways musically and work well.

[determined2play]

Thanks guys, i do have it set to a BT that some guys on another forum did. I will check with them to see if they mind me sharing it. But be warned my vox cannot carry it.