New original

[roger24]

its called "im gonna miss you guys" im looking fro feedback. thanks guys.



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[the bluesmann]

Had to grin for sure. you can't make good money working at Mc Donalds? hamburgers and beards?
if you serious, god bless you! good song.

[Mr.Excitement]

Fun listen.

Jim likes

[Roger L.]

Interesting tune, the only critique I would mention that comes to mind is the vocal doubling. You might think of using harmony instead of doubling . . . the doubling sounds like you'd like to have harmony but lack the ability, IMHO. Other then that it sounds like a good start.

[FX]

Cool tune. I'm probably going to think of it when I eat a hamburger and fries.

The only thing I would say is that some of the lyrics, despite working, sounds a bit awkward as it goes where my ears expect a smooth rhyme. But it does flow despite that awkward feeling of anticipation where I'm think, how is that going to transition. I guess I'm trying to predict and get something unexpected.

Cheers.

[HalfBlindLefty]

hehe, fun song. Sounds real good.

[crunk]

Cool post enjoyed it...

[tcanova]

I like it Roger, good stuff man!